Fòram na Gàidhlig

Halò, a Jason Tha mi a' fuireach anns na Stàitean Aoinaichte cuideachd, 's tha mi ag ionnsachadh Gàidhlig. Mar a tha thu ag iarraidh, is urrainn dhomh a bhruidhinn leat air an Skype. Air an Skype, is mise FaolanMacaoidh. Chan ealanta a th'annam, ach ni mi dè 's urrainn dhomh. I live in the United St...

Halò, a Phòl! Is mise Iòsef MacAoidh. Tha mi a' fuireach anns na Stàitean Aonaichte, anns an Carolina Tuath.

I wanted to practice a little bit more to try and work on my grammar and vocabulary, so I tried to tr*nsl*t* the first paragraph of a book. Could someone please look over this and correct it where necessary? Bha i mo là-breith nuair a ghlaodh mo aba mi anns an oifis aige agus thug dhomh a' litir sin...

A bheil faclair-bhruidhinn ann? Tha mi ag iarraidh ionnsachadh Gàidhlig, ach cha urrain dhomh a bhruidhinn le duine sam bith.

With iarr, would you use an inverted nominal?

Tha mi ag iarraidh chun an stòir a dhol

No:
Tha mi ag iarraidh a dhol chun an stòir.

Tapadh leibh!

So: dè a tha thu ag iarraidh orm a ràdh sa Gàidhlig?

A bheil sin ceart?

Which of these would be more correct?

Dè a tha thu ag iarraidh a tha mi a' ràdh?

Or

Dè a tha thu ag iarraidh gu bheil mi a' ràdh?

Could you also tell me why one is more correct than the other?

If anyone wants to converse on Skype, my ID is FaolanMacAoidh. I learn better by actually using and having conversations.

I'm learning by myself with online resources. I would love to be able to watch Gàidhlig tv or hear a Gaelic station, but there aren't many options out in the States.

Is mise FaolanMacaoidh. I hope to hear from someone soon. I need all the help I can get.

Is mise Faolan, agus tha mi a' fuireach anns na Stàitean Aonaichte.

I haven't been learning for very long, and would like a penpal who would be able to correct my grammar, and possibly be able to help with pronunciations.

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