Help with a Sentence for a Poem I'm Writing

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faoileag
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Re: Help with a Sentence for a Poem I'm Writing

Unread post by faoileag » Sat Feb 29, 2020 7:26 pm

fuilich, a' fuileachadh is more what a doctor would do - draw blood, take blood from someone, i.e. used transitively.

If you don't like dòrtadh, what about sìl, a' sìleadh? Oooze, trickle, flow.



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Re: Help with a Sentence for a Poem I'm Writing

Unread post by GunChleoc » Sat Feb 29, 2020 9:32 pm

It's just a creative suggestion, because you had "fuil*" twice in the same line.
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