fuilich, a' fuileachadh is more what a doctor would do - draw blood, take blood from someone, i.e. used transitively.
If you don't like dòrtadh, what about sìl, a' sìleadh? Oooze, trickle, flow.
Help with a Sentence for a Poem I'm Writing
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Re: Help with a Sentence for a Poem I'm Writing
It's just a creative suggestion, because you had "fuil*" twice in the same line.
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